Yes: A Short Story
Have you thought about it? she sat up.
About what?
She touched his face with her finger tips. The next moment he felt the velvet touch of her lips pass over his brow.
About what? he repeated.
Her fingers were sliding over his face. Little by little slowing down.
Don’t, he said.
What?
Don’t stop.
An inscrutable smile stirred her lips.
So have you thought about it? she repeated the question touching his upper lip with her index finger. He swallowed, not able to take his eyes off her lips, trying to guess what would come next.
So? she asked.
What?
Quizzical look. Tantalizing silence.
His heart missed a beat. She smiled again clearly enjoying his helplessness.
Yes, he exhaled hardly audible.
Yes?
Yes.
What yes?
Yes, we will buy that damn dog, sweetheart.
PS: If you are up for some fiction, check out this writing contest at The Clarity of Night.You will not be disappointed.
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Hi,
Happy New Year! Hope u r doing gr8!
Was a bit buzy all thse days so i was out of action:(
Nice story! Loved it!:) Toooo cuute!
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Happy New Year to you too
I am glad you liked the story. I actually enjoyed writing it!
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oh, haha! Good one!
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Glad you loved it, Jessica!
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Hehe….I was like waiting and waiting to hear what is she asking….It was about that damn dog
Cuteness and funny attempt at its best 
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I am glad you enjoyed this one. And also glad that it kept you waiting for the outcome.
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Mahesh
I did attempt for the competition at Clarity of night. Do check my entry at my blog…
Thanks to you… I tried for it
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will read on the blog and on contest itself. I am sure you have come up with something nice!
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Oh Lena this is good one, I was thinking about the marriage proposal, lol. That damn dog, lol. Lena happy new year, and I will visit you later through facebook hope it will help to get numbers you like :).
Anna
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I decided marriage proposal is way too obvious, so i went for a dog
And there is no compulsion to visit more for you, you are one of the most loyal readers of mine!
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Love - That is the discussion.
Happy 2010 - May peace/happiness be with you forever for always. Amen.
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Thank you for the beautiful wishes!
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I like this story a lot. Using the small exchanges spced out really builds the suspense. Nice ending too, I like how you turned us away from the expected.
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Thanks, Brent! I am really glad I managed to achieve with the story what I planned initially.
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Congrats for maintaining the suspense. You could keep one wondering as to what would be the answer.
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Thanks!! I would like to see what were your guesses while reading.
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hehe.. lovely!
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Thanks
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Very teasing
Naughty but nice.
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Thanks Jacqui, I am glad you enjoyed reading
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ha ha
that was a good one lena - we will buy the damn dog 
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Thanks!! I really hope they will buy the dog!
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Loved your blog! This was an interesting story, LOL.
-Marty
http://coffeewithmarty.com
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Welcome here! Glad that you liked this story!
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hahaha thats a wonderful story… nicely told
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I LOVE THIS !!!
so sweet… =)
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