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Honey, Why Are You Calling Me So Late?

9 November 2009 16 Comments

I have not posted any stories recently and it has reasons. First, being sick for more than a week, did not really leave me with any options other than bedrest, so no writing. Second, I was busy with other stuff and fiction writing somehow took a long pause. But today I wanted to post here a story. A FICTION one. It is an old one written more than a year ago but it is one of my most favorite stories even if not one of the best ones. Inspired by the song by Hinder “Lips of an angel”, again one of my favorites. They both make me cry, the song and the story. Or maybe that’s just my mood.

“Honey, why are you calling me so late?” he sounded worried as she had never before called at such odd hour.

What could she tell him, if she didn’t know herself why she was calling. It just hit her that she needed to hear his voice. There were days when she missed him more than on others. When she needed him more. The days when she cried more. Today was one of them. Being so far from each other in each sense had made things so much complicated. But could she tell him that? Would he understand? Did he feel the same? Or did he get over that?

“Honey, why are you crying? Is everything okay?”

No, nothing was okay, she thought to herself but whispered into the phone that she was fine and just needed to hear his voice.

He smiled. At least she felt he did. Even after all these long years she still could sense things about him, could feel him.

“It is so good to hear your voice saying my name. It sounds so sweet“. In the other corner of the world she smiled back at him.

honey why you calline me so late

“Still, angel, why you called? Anything happened?” he kept asking. She had no idea why she had called him up. Maybe it was just a habit. Whenever she felt down she used to call him.

Three years ago when her sister run from home with some soon-to-be-a-rockstar who never had become neither a soon-to-be nor a rockstar. Her sister was 14.
Two years ago when her mom got into hospital and had to undergo a surgery.
One year ago when her dad died.
Finally, six months ago when things had gone so terribly wrong and she didn’t know how to deal with them.

Each time when she was drowning in the ocean of troubles the saving solution was to call him. And he always had been there for her. Shedding her tears, giving support, handling her with utmost care. Nothing had changed and yet everything did. She couldn’t explain it this time. She just felt this urge to call him tonight.

“You know, I dreamt about you last night”, she said.
“Funny, that you called tonight, I have been thinking about you all day long”, he replied.

In two different parts of the world two souls were connected through more than just a phone but an invisible line that was so easy to be broken but yet it seemed impossible for the both of them. They both listened to the silence for a while wondering about what the other might be thinking right now. Both seemed to enjoy this peaceful precious moment they’ve got. One of the moments you never want to end.

He interrupted the blissful silence.

“My girl is in the next room… Sometimes I wish she was you.”
“Does she know you still talk to me?” she asked.
“She wouldn’t like it… Does he have any idea?”
“Not sure if I should tell him…”

And again the silence settled. But this one was different. Silence of regrets and unexpressed emotions.

“I guess we never really moved on”, he said.
“I guess we did not”, she replied.

They were apart and yet they were together. Worlds apart with one thin line which connected them. The thin line of a short life span when they were happy together. Then they had made a decision. A wrong one. One wrong decision which will haunt them till the end of their lives. They know it. And they live with it. And she will keep calling him because those two minutes talks once in a while is the only thing they have left.

And they are happy.

Once in a while.

For a couple of minutes.

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“Honey, why are you calling me so late?”

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16 Comments »

  • ADesi said:

    wonderful narration and simple story for all our lives :)
    at least of my life too!

    aching but true!

    She wouldn’t like it… Does he have any idea?”
    “Not sure if I should tell him…”

    should it not be her instead of he and him? just wondering!

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    The Colors Magazine

    I am glad you liked the story, unfortunately yes, many people can relate to something like that.
    Reagrading your question, no, it is as I meant in the story.. they are talking about their respective partners :)

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  • Rajlakshmi said:

    wow that is such a sweet but very heartfelt story… just loved it… and guess what it is going to haunt me for sometime …
    beautifully penned :)

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    The Colors Magazine

    Thank you :)
    It is one of the old ones, but has a special meaning for me.

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  • Andy said:

    I am very afraid that I am now making this wrong decision. My gf still calls her ex whenever she cries. I know this when I secretly sneak up on her. I never confront her about this, I don’t want to cause any more pain. She won’t talk to me when she cries.

    We are now about to get married. But I have a feeling she would still do this. And something in my head is telling me she would be happier with him. After all, they were together for many years before I became the third person in a love triangle that sets alot of bad things in motion…

    But me. My ego. My victory. She is my trophy. And the wedding would be my award ceremony.

    Your story will haunt me many nights.

    Respect.

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    The Colors Magazine

    I feel the best thing to clear doubts is to talk about how you feel. It is amazing though how understanding and tolerating you are in your relationship.
    Stay happy :)

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  • Mahesh said:

    Well, what do i say….The regrets have been shown very beautifully.

    Sometimes i donno why we just decide by our self to move on and end up never doing it.

    Heart touching incident :)

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    The Colors Magazine

    I wish there were no regrets in life. Ever.

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  • Vands said:

    You’d written this before and I had commented then too as far as I remember.
    The song and the story is just sooo close to my heart that I can say nuthing except *sigh*
    Beautifully written Lena :)

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    The Colors Magazine

    Hi Vands :)
    That’s how I feel about the song and this story. Close to my heart too :)

    Thank you dear!

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  • Anna said:

    Lena excellent dialog. Always enjoy reading your stuff. BTW hope all is in order now and you are feeling better. Anna :)

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    The Colors Magazine

    All is fine, Anna :) Flad you liked the story!

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  • Amity Me said:

    Oh Lena, I almost thought you’ve read my thoughts some times ago…:)

    I almost thought you’ve felt how I feel, I almost thought I was the girl in the story and that you’ve come to know me really that much!

    You always touch my heart of your posts!

    Maybe because I am a silly, hopeless romantic who always tries to live in dreams, whose dreams become the realizations of deep-seated feelings within me.

    I love you Lena for writing this one. The story is just too familiar with me, more than any of your stories.

    Goodnight dear!

    Miss yah over my Place! Do come by when you have time!

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    The Colors Magazine

    I know so many people who can relate to this story. Guess whoever wrote the song, knew what he was writing about.

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  • Vinz said:

    Numb…

    Well narrated..!!
    I could very well relate to this..
    Some bad decisions..!!

    Great piece of work..

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    The Colors Magazine

    Thank you, Vinz and welcome here :)
    Glad you liked this story.

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