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Sonador: 55 Fiction

2 October 2009 68 Comments

Contest entry #2: Sonador

He was holding her face in his hands looking directly into her eyes which were shinning like diamonds in water, and then he said “I Love You”.

With her heart filled with happiness and little shy she replied “Me to”.

He took her face very close to his…

“Sam” wake up dreamer its lunch time.

Author’s note: Sonador means Dreamer.

About the author: Hemanth Potluri, blogging at www.hemanthpotluri.blogspot.com

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  • ste said:

    hehe hemu…i felt something like that much before….i tht it wd be dream :P nice

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    Hemanth Potluri

    thanks ste :)…u know everything we feel may be part of our fiction :)…..well then u guessed it before :)..

    urs..hemu..

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    # 2 October 2009 at 2:04 pm
  • Kunjal said:

    :D:D nice dream:)

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    Hemanth Potluri

    Thanks kunjal :)..yeah it was a nice dream for him :)..

    urs..hemu..

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    # 2 October 2009 at 2:07 pm
  • AJai said:

    Tht’s cho tragic… gr8 build up… unfortunate end. ;)

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    Hemanth Potluri

    Thanks Ajai :)…not unfortunate totally he had great time dreaming right :)…yeah a little bit tragic since it dint continue :)..

    urs..hemu..

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    # 2 October 2009 at 4:45 pm
  • Anwesa said:

    :D made me smile :) a lot actually :) :)

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    Hemanth Potluri

    Thanks sis Anwesa :)…i am happy that my writing made u smile :)…that to a lot :)..

    urs..hemu..

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    # 2 October 2009 at 5:01 pm
  • Yamini Meduri said:

    simple…..yet nice 55Fiction dear…Hemanth….you are a magician yaar…..u can make people smile..!!!

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    Hemanth Potluri

    Thanks Yamini :)..magician me hehe :)..yeah i am trying to make a bird disappear from cage to its freedom :)…i am happy ur smiling :)..

    urs..hemu..

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    # 2 October 2009 at 6:23 pm
  • BLUERAIN said:

    arrr! I should have guessed it from the clever title. I really love this one. too bad for you sam, too bad mon ami

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    Hemanth Potluri

    Thanks blue rain :)…well if u know the meaning then its not clever enough…:)..thanks for loving it mate :)…yeah bad for sam to :P..

    urs..hemu..

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    # 2 October 2009 at 11:51 pm
  • Prajyot Mainkar said:

    Hey Nice One…!! U really Rock Dude..!!

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    Hemanth Potluri

    Thanks Prajyot :)…i am trying to join the rock band now :)…:D…

    urs..hemu..

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    # 3 October 2009 at 8:07 am
  • swati said:

    lol!!!Good one!!

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    Hemanth Potluri

    Thanks Swati :)…thanks for liking it :)..

    urs..hemu..

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    # 3 October 2009 at 9:23 am
  • Aniket said:

    Dayum! The good ones are always a dream, aren’t they.
    Reality continues to ruin our lives…

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    Hemanth Potluri

    Thanks Aniket :)….

    sometimes a dream only makes u more smiley then the reality pain :)…and yeah u told it correct the gud ones sometimes are dream then the reality :)..Thanks for liking it :)..

    urs..hemu..

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    # 3 October 2009 at 9:43 am
  • Priya Joyce said:

    hahahah poor chap…. liked tat one hemz :):)

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    Hemanth Potluri

    Thanks Priya :)..

    yeah sam is a poor chap really :P..he can join sharuk for dreamz unlimited :P….

    thanks for liking it :)..

    urs..hemu..

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    # 3 October 2009 at 2:21 pm
  • Vinz said:

    Hehe..

    That was a funny 55..!!

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    Hemanth Potluri

    Thanks Vinz :)..

    thanks for liking it :)..

    urs..hemu..

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    # 3 October 2009 at 4:37 pm
  • Nithin said:

    cOOOL JOB da.. :)

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    Hemanth Potluri

    Thanks Nithin :)..

    thanks for liking it :)..

    urs..hemu..

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    # 3 October 2009 at 4:46 pm
  • Farah said:

    Ah Hemz ..are you talking from experience? :P …

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    Hemanth Potluri

    Thanks Farah

    a little exp may be :P..u know me :)…:D..

    urs..hemu..

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    # 3 October 2009 at 7:00 pm
  • zahid said:

    The best line of this 55 fiction is ‘Eyes which were shining like diamonds in water’ A very good picturization !!!

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    Hemanth Potluri

    Thanks Zahid :)..

    i to love that line…yeah it took much time to picturize the eyes :)…thanks for liking it :)..

    urs..hemu..

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    # 3 October 2009 at 8:05 pm
  • Srikanth said:

    Good one.

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    Hemanth Potluri

    Thanks Srikanth

    thanks for liking it :)..

    urs..hemu..

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    # 3 October 2009 at 9:27 pm
  • Prats said:

    Lolz !! Loved reading this Hemu :)

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    Hemanth Potluri

    Thanks Prats :)..

    thanks for loving it :)…

    urs..hemu..

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    # 3 October 2009 at 10:58 pm
  • Jessica said:

    Loving it, Hemu! :)

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    Hemanth Potluri

    Thanks Jessica :)..

    thanks for loving it :)..

    urs..hemu..

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    # 4 October 2009 at 12:51 am
  • pramoda said:

    HI Hemanth..

    haha..well written abt the dreamer..all the best for the contest ..:)

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    Hemanth Potluri

    Thanks Pramoda :)..

    thanks so much for the wishes :)…

    urs..hemu..

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    # 4 October 2009 at 6:35 am
  • Smriti said:

    Lol…this was unexpected. very nicely done though. Good work dude! :)

    (P.S: Is this your dream by any chance? :P)

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    Hemanth Potluri

    Thanks Smriti(dolls) :)

    thanks for liking it :)…

    p.s: :P…may be it was my dream in the office :P..heheh…

    urs..hemu..

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    # 4 October 2009 at 7:36 am
  • sindhu said:

    Nice dream Hemanth….hav u experienced such dream any time? ;-)

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    Hemanth Potluri

    thanks Sindhu :)..

    sometimes when i over sleep i may exp these types of dreams :P…

    urs..hemu..

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    # 4 October 2009 at 8:55 am
  • prathistha prasad said:

    Your 55fiction is really fantastic… I loved this reading and yet it was a dream… sooo nice and made me smile.. I think you can always make the people to cheer up…

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    Hemanth Potluri

    Thanks Prathistha :)..

    it is a dream but all dreams some day come true :)…

    thanks so much for the sweet comment :)..

    urs..hemu..

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    # 4 October 2009 at 2:44 pm
  • Rajlakshmi said:

    Hehehe pöor guy just a dream.. Guess a guy’s dreams are always like that lol nicely penned

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    Hemanth Potluri

    Thanks Rajlakshmi :)..

    some times guy tries to even fulfill them fast :)…

    thanks for liking it :)..

    urs..hemu..

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    # 4 October 2009 at 5:09 pm
  • Sasikiran said:

    Eto vellipoyindi manasu!!!!!!

    good one!

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    Hemanth Potluri

    Thanks Sasikiran :)…

    eto velindi manasu koncham chebuthey nenu telusukunta :)..

    thanks for liking it :)..

    urs..hemu..

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    # 5 October 2009 at 12:16 pm
  • nagesh said:

    Great work man…its really fabulous!

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    Hemanth Potluri

    Thanks Nagesh :)..

    “fabulous” i am so happy with that word for my work..thank u so much :)..

    urs..hemu..

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    # 5 October 2009 at 1:51 pm
  • Gleenn said:

    lol. that was fun. I hope it isn’t based from experience, lol. kidding… That’s a good one.

    Thanks for commenting on my entry “Last Grip”. I had to go to your blog before i found this entry. All the best. :)

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    Hemanth Potluri

    Thanks Gleenn :)…

    not exp but i day dream a lot :P..thanks for liking it :)…

    that post u made was really nice and grip holding :)..thanks for going to my blog :)…and all the best to u to :)..

    urs..hemu..

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    # 5 October 2009 at 3:57 pm
  • Kally said:

    Nice one dude !! I did not expect the ending..poor guy !! pity on him..hehe…Keep writing !!

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    Hemanth Potluri

    Thanks kalyan :)..

    yeah u can pity him :P..lol..well he atleast enjoyed in the dream :)..

    urs..hemu..

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    # 6 October 2009 at 7:28 am
  • Saranya said:

    Aww..it was only a dream. poor guy! lol. nice one hemu!
    Keep writing.

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    Hemanth Potluri

    Thanks Saranya :)..

    it was dream unlimited heheh…thanks for liking it :)..

    urs..hemu..

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    # 6 October 2009 at 9:46 pm
  • Gokul said:

    lol… good one.. happens to me once in a while.. ;) ..

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    Hemanth Potluri

    Thanks Gokul :)..

    well it happens to lot till in the list of single ..not me :P..heheh :)..

    urs..hemu..

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    # 7 October 2009 at 5:45 am
  • Amity Me said:

    Hmmm… a dreamer like me…

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    Hemanth Potluri

    Thanks Amity :)

    everyone is a dreamer :)

    urs..hemu..

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    # 7 October 2009 at 9:55 am
  • suree said:

    Hemz…

    The i like the total scene and almost felt it .. but at the end .. its a dream…

    I too get lotta dreams like this .. so I Loved this one..

    My vote for you :)

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    Hemanth Potluri

    Thanks Suree

    thanks for liking it :)..being single everyone gets these :)..heheh…now i may not get more :p…:)..

    urs..hemu..

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    # 7 October 2009 at 10:07 am
  • Srikar said:

    Its Strange. :) Still good piece of imagination.
    lol.

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    Hemanth Potluri

    Thanks Srikar

    yeah its strange :p..

    urs..hemu..

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    # 7 October 2009 at 5:07 pm
  • Bhaskar said:

    really gud one :)

    but didnt continue :(

    All d best hemu….

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    Hemanth Potluri

    thanks Bhaskar

    :) thanks for liking it…i can continue it but 55 words limit right :)..

    urs..hemu..

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    # 7 October 2009 at 5:39 pm
  • satya said:

    Dreaming is ok, and such kind of dreams are quite common, but the bad thing is day dreaming….!

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    Hemanth Potluri

    Thanks Satya

    yeah dome times day dreaming is really bad i totally agree with u :)..

    urs..hemu..

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    # 8 October 2009 at 8:31 am
  • The Colors Magazine (author) said:

    That was really sweet, Hemanth, though bit predictable, especially by title, but nevertheless, good work :)

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    # 13 October 2009 at 3:26 pm
  • Vani said:

    Hey another super fiction from u Hemz.
    Juz read it nd voted..Always late..Hope am not too late..

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    # 8 November 2009 at 6:47 pm

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