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Protection: 55 Fiction

4 October 2009 15 Comments

Contest Entry #28: Protection

Completely drenched, she sat by the pond in the pouring rain with an umbrella held precariously.

“What are you doing in the rain?” I asked angrily.  “Come inside!”

With innocent voice she replied, “I am protecting the frogs from the rain. They were crying for help”

Charmed beyond measure, I joined her. Mom’s admonition long forgotten.

Author: Meena (Winnie the Poohi) blogging at http://catawampusme.in/

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15 Comments »

  • Hemanth Potluri said:

    its sweet innocent and beautiful :)…

    urs..hemu..

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    Winnie the poohi

    Thank you Dear :)

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    # 4 October 2009 at 11:51 am
  • joker said:

    very cute missy..
    u captured the essence of a lil gurl, very nicely!

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    Winnie the poohi

    :) Thank you!

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    # 4 October 2009 at 3:12 pm
  • Anwesa said:

    its so sweet,pure and cherubic.loved it :)

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    Winnie the poohi

    Thank you dearie! :)

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    # 4 October 2009 at 4:49 pm
  • Aniket said:

    Okay, now you are officially my fav. author here. If there’s more of such good stuff over at your blog, I’m becoming a follower. Going over at your place to give a look… :D

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    Winnie the poohi

    That is so sweet of you! hope I dont disappoint!

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    # 4 October 2009 at 8:03 pm
  • AJai said:

    Sweet… childish innocence captured beautifully.

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    Winnie the poohi

    Thank you!!!

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    # 4 October 2009 at 8:06 pm
  • Hasna said:

    Loved it :-). Sweet, innocent. .and quite charming. Good job

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    # 5 October 2009 at 5:23 pm
  • Sangfroid said:

    Innocence is priceless. Well written!

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    # 7 October 2009 at 2:40 pm
  • Kunjal said:

    cutest story award goes to you:)

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    # 7 October 2009 at 3:19 pm
  • Shirley Cochran Walls said:

    this is SO cute and inspiring…love it!

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    # 7 October 2009 at 11:40 pm
  • The Colors Magazine (author) said:

    That was one of the cutest and most charming stories in the contest :)

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    # 13 October 2009 at 4:46 pm

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