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Needles: 55 Fiction

3 October 2009 12 Comments

Contest Entry #20: Needles

“This is heaven”

“You sure?”

“This is unlike anything you have ever tasted”

“Better than blueberry muffins?”

“F**k your blueberry muffins, this is the real stuff”

His eyes glistened, lips curled, the shiny metal , hint of red and my end.

Few children outside were doing a protest march.

STOP DRUG ABUSE!

Life faded away.

About the author: Abhrajit Datta, blogging at  http://babagoesawry.blogspot.com.

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12 Comments »

  • Anwesa said:

    I guess its one of my best reads in the contest so far.

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    # 3 October 2009 at 2:05 pm
  • Aniket said:

    Great work for a great cause.

    Well done!

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    # 3 October 2009 at 2:47 pm
  • Kunjal said:

    wow !!!!
    finally this is true 55 fiction all the elements and a strong moral too:)I agree one of the best:)

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    # 3 October 2009 at 8:34 pm
  • Prats said:

    Awesome !!

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    # 3 October 2009 at 10:52 pm
  • Hemanth Potluri said:

    it was an awesome read :)…just loved it :)..

    urs..hemu..

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    # 4 October 2009 at 12:08 pm
  • Rajlakshmi said:

    A sad tale but so true.. Good one.

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    # 4 October 2009 at 5:33 pm
  • Winnie the poohi said:

    Awesome! One of fav out here :-)

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    # 4 October 2009 at 10:23 pm
  • abhri said:

    thanks guys :)

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    # 5 October 2009 at 9:20 am
  • Sangfroid said:

    Lost in ecstasy :-)

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    # 7 October 2009 at 2:48 pm
  • Gleenn said:

    a good campaign against drugs. That makes this story a good one. :)

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    # 7 October 2009 at 3:17 pm
  • The Colors Magazine (author) said:

    Good topic, I like it when people raise such issues in their work, writing not only for the sake of entertainment but also for raising awareness.

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    abhri

    thanks

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    # 13 October 2009 at 4:07 pm

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