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It’s Dead: 55 Fiction

2 October 2009 19 Comments

Contest entry #3: It’s Dead

It was a crazy moment. I never realized things would get so serious. The last minute talk did not help. I did the ‘right’ thing before it was too late.

I had learnt to live sans you.

Now its you again. But I can’t do it anymore. My love is dead - like my unborn baby.

Author: Anwesa, blogging at www.anwesananda.blogspot.com

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19 Comments »

  • Kunjal said:

    so tragic !!

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    Anwesa

    Did you like it,Kunjal?

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    # 2 October 2009 at 2:04 pm
  • ste said:

    yes…sad nd true! !

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    Anwesa

    @ste,
    hope you liked it….

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    ste

    yup liked it :)

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    # 2 October 2009 at 2:11 pm
  • MultiMenon said:

    Mysterious… :) and satires are your forte,aint it?? :)

    Nikhil

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    # 2 October 2009 at 2:52 pm
  • Anwesa said:

    @multimenon,
    you might not be wrong…glad you came here :)

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    # 2 October 2009 at 3:08 pm
  • Hemanth Potluri said:

    nice presentation of words sis :)..but the ending was tragic…:)…me liked it :)…

    urs..hemu..

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    Anwesa

    @Hemanth,
    thanks!!!a lot :)

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    # 2 October 2009 at 5:38 pm
  • Lakshminarayanan Iyer said:

    @ anwesa:

    satirical hopefully doesn’t turn out to be true…

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    Anwesa

    Its best if its fiction forever…

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    # 3 October 2009 at 12:30 am
  • Aniket said:

    Tragic and sad. You’ve portrayed stark emotions very elegantly.
    A beautiful piece. Liked it a lot.

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    Anwesa

    Thanks for reading !!!Glad you liked it :)

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    # 3 October 2009 at 9:50 am
  • zahid said:

    The best line of this 55 fiction is ‘I did the right thing before it was too late.’ Its original meaning is conveyed once the story is finished.

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    Anwesa

    thanks!!!

    yeah,that’s the very reason why you find the word “right” within apostrophes.

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    # 3 October 2009 at 8:10 pm
  • Rajlakshmi said:

    Sad öne.. Well penned

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    # 4 October 2009 at 4:40 pm
  • Anwesa said:

    @rajlakshmi,
    thanks!!! All the best to you too!!

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    # 4 October 2009 at 5:00 pm
  • The Colors Magazine (author) said:

    That was very strong, great work, very emotional.

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    Anwesa

    thanks a lot!!! it encouraged me a lot.

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    # 13 October 2009 at 3:27 pm

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