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He Changed: 55 Fiction

3 October 2009 8 Comments

Contest Entry #22: He Changed

It was senior year when he had hair and smiled full and wide. We walked down the hallway to the bus and laughed together about school.
The next day a car swerved and hit a crowd, he was hit and fell.
The last day of school he smiled again, a zigzag scar of a grin.

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8 Comments »

  • Anwesa said:

    again a poignant piece…kudos to the writer!

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    # 3 October 2009 at 2:02 pm
  • Aniket said:

    Well on the bright side he can always use the line “You wanna know how I got these scars?” as a pickup line.

    PS: Joker rules!

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    # 3 October 2009 at 2:54 pm
  • Prats said:

    interesting!!

    @Aniket : nice suggestion :)

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    # 3 October 2009 at 10:51 pm
  • Hemanth Potluri said:

    the smile never leaves :)…

    urs..hemu..

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    # 4 October 2009 at 12:06 pm
  • Rajlakshmi said:

    Loved the brighter part of the story.. scars couldnt fade a smile..

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    # 4 October 2009 at 5:41 pm
  • AJai said:

    I liked the way it ended. Gave the whole story a positive tinge. Dark humour type.

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    # 4 October 2009 at 8:05 pm
  • BLUERAIN said:

    beautiful! I love the title, it summarizes the whole story!

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    # 4 October 2009 at 10:59 pm
  • The Colors Magazine (author) said:

    It is amazing how strong some people are, facing with smile whatever comes their way!

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    # 13 October 2009 at 4:27 pm

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