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Father: 55 Fiction

4 October 2009 18 Comments

Contest Entry #25: Father

“I promise to return soon”
“You really have to go?”
“You know dear, it hurts me as much to leave you alone”
“I am not alone”
“Oh! Even i will keep your memories close”
“I meant our child” she said smiling.
“I am gonna be a father!” he realized and canceled his trip.

Author: Pratibha Sofat.

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  • Hemanth Potluri said:

    relationship make u realize everything …

    **“I meant our child” she said smiling

    the line really struck me…and the smile of her tells the happiness she is going through :)…

    urs..hemu..

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    Prats

    Thanks Hemu … glad for your comment :)

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    # 4 October 2009 at 11:59 am
  • Winnie the poohi said:

    congrats pratsie :P :D

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    Prats

    :P

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    # 4 October 2009 at 12:41 pm
  • Leo said:

    Prattu, badiya yaar!

    Super you write.. like Hemu, even I loved that line the most!

    Simply
    One
    Fantastic
    And
    Terrific writer!

    Beautiful 55 fiction! :) Love, conflict.. everything has an essence! Kudos!

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    Prats

    thanks for the kind words Leo :)

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    # 4 October 2009 at 2:04 pm
  • AJai said:

    That one line that Hemu’s higlighted had everything… lovely work.

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    Prats

    Thanks !! never thought this story would be liked so …

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    # 4 October 2009 at 3:00 pm
  • Anwesa said:

    made me smile!!!! i wished if it were someone’s reality and not a stroke of fantasy…Kudos!!!

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    Prats

    This could be true someday for some one .. you never know :)

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    # 4 October 2009 at 4:55 pm
  • Aniket said:

    I like mushy stories. After all I believe we are all fans of TLR here. :D

    Good job.

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    Prats

    Thanks Aniket :)

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    # 4 October 2009 at 6:50 pm
  • abhri said:

    nice work maaast

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    Prats

    Thanks a ton Abhri :)

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    # 5 October 2009 at 9:23 am
  • Gleenn said:

    that must be the joyous time for the couple. loved it. :)

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    Prats

    my pleasure :)

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    # 5 October 2009 at 4:16 pm
  • Sangfroid said:

    Nice timing for the disclosure :-)

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    # 7 October 2009 at 2:46 pm
  • The Colors Magazine (author) said:

    Wish life were that simple :)
    Touching and sweet.

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    # 13 October 2009 at 4:29 pm

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