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Ever After: 55 Fiction

3 October 2009 7 Comments

Contest Entry #21: Ever After

Michael is clearing the hospital bills. Just a week back she was hospitalized beaten by Michael. She had decided that she will never go back to him. But Michael apologized and she decided other wise. She knows she would go to a home she can call – theirs and not hers or his.

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  • ste said:

    hmmm…. read it thrice to get the story …finally gt it ….nice work :)

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    # 3 October 2009 at 1:27 pm
  • Anwesa said:

    well-written!!!

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    # 3 October 2009 at 2:03 pm
  • Aniket said:

    I know someone who went through all that and took the same decision.

    I didn’t supported her decision but its important to support her. Well crafted piece.

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    # 3 October 2009 at 2:50 pm
  • Kunjal said:

    thanks everyone:)
    this is my first attempt in 55 fiction and I find it very difficult to wrap everything in 55 words.It is amazing to see other people creating magic in 55 words:)

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    # 3 October 2009 at 8:08 pm
  • Hemanth Potluri said:

    nicely written kunjal :)..

    urs..hemu..

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    # 3 October 2009 at 9:28 pm
  • Gleenn said:

    The beatings would definitely end up everything for us if it’s me. And that she would go home to a house called “theirs”? I need to be convinced here. But a lot of women do so, mostly because of the children. And for such men? I call them gays.

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    # 5 October 2009 at 4:58 pm
  • The Colors Magazine (author) said:

    How often women forgive their men in the hope that everything will be fine from now onwards. The life shows that it is never going to be the way such men promise…

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    # 13 October 2009 at 4:16 pm

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