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Drama Backstage: 55 Fiction

4 October 2009 11 Comments

Contest Entry #38: Drama Backstage

“I’m done. Meet ya backstage”, Eric quickly whispered. She flitted as though led by hypnotism

He pecked at her cheek

“You missed!”

Flirty conversation… Making out… All was quiet but for the suspiring noise.

“This is a ruddy university not your bedrooms!!”

Naturally panicking Eric said “Somebody call the ambulance. I’m on with the Heimlich maneuver”

Author: Gracelyne Fernando, blogging at http://gracelyne.wordpress.com

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11 Comments »

  • Prats said:

    Interesting take !

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    Gracy

    Thanks Prats! :)

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    # 5 October 2009 at 9:20 am
  • Kally said:

    Hey that was coool !!! :-)

    Eric is a clever Guy it seems !!! ;)

    Keep writing Graceleyne

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    # 6 October 2009 at 8:32 pm
  • Hemanth Potluri said:

    that was good plot …eric is too intelligent :)..

    urs..hemu..

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    # 7 October 2009 at 7:50 am
  • Gleenn said:

    that’s really funny. lol. i admire the way you twisted a backstage romance into a humor. that’s really great job. Humor is something that I actually plan to develop in my work. I don’t do often.

    Loved it :)

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    # 7 October 2009 at 3:04 pm
  • Aniket said:

    lol. Nice one. Have to remember that if I ever land up in backstage trouble. On second thoughts, it doesn’t seem all that bad when you think about it. :D

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    # 7 October 2009 at 6:29 pm
  • The Colors Magazine (author) said:

    That was really funny. I love it when someone uses humor in their work and does it well, you really know how to do it. Good work :)

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    # 13 October 2009 at 5:09 pm
  • Honorable Mention in the 55 Fiction Contest | Brian Thomas Clark said:

    [...] Drama Backstage: 55 Fiction (6) [...]

    # 16 October 2009 at 4:28 am
  • Drama Backstage « Coup de grâce said:

    [...] on whether to publish this* or not.. After seeing the heart-warming comments I received at the contest entry page..I thought “Might as well hit the Publish buttton” And by this* I meant my 55 [...]

    # 16 October 2009 at 10:08 pm
  • 55 Fiction « Coup de grâce said:

    [...] on whether to publish this* or not.. After seeing the heart-warming comments I received at the contest entry page..I thought “Might as well hit the Publish buttton” And by this* I meant my 55 [...]

    # 16 October 2009 at 10:10 pm
  • Gracy said:

    Thanks, everybody for your heart-warming comments! :D

    @Kally @Hemu:
    Yeah!! Eric has a very good presence of mind.
    @GLeenn:
    Glad you found it humorous :D All the best to u too!
    @Anikeet:
    Tell me about it..incase you get to implement this kinda drama! ;)
    @The Colors Magazine (author) :
    First of all, Thanks for holding this contest.This is my first ever 55fiction. :) & your appreciation meant a lot to me,too!

    I took the liberty of importing these comments onto my page! :)

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    # 16 October 2009 at 10:50 pm

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