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Decision: 55 Fiction

4 October 2009 8 Comments

Contest Entry #30: Decision

Arguments. Chaos. Anger. Madness. Gun-Shot. Blackout.
She lay there - lifeless. He stood there-smiling.
Siren. Police. Evidence. Case.
He knew it was a trap.
Summons. Court. Jury. Sentence.
There was just no escape.
Calm. Tranquility. Peace.
They were together again and this time to stay.

Author: Sonia blogging at http://www.hourlongmoments.blogspot.com

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  • Hemanth Potluri said:

    sometimes a small argument may lead to a big decision…i loved the way u gave the words and a sentence describing them :)..

    urs..hemu..

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    # 4 October 2009 at 12:01 pm
  • Akshat said:

    A good one…but the plot has a loop hole!!

    If it was a crime of passion….and if he wanted to be with her for eternity…he could have easily shot himself too…..why wait for the sentence???

    Best Of Luck!!

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    Gleenn

    I agree :)

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    # 4 October 2009 at 12:09 pm
  • Rajlakshmi said:

    Nicely expressed though i felt it was incomplete… Good luck

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    # 4 October 2009 at 4:52 pm
  • Kunjal said:

    love the way you depicted evrything:)

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    # 5 October 2009 at 9:51 am
  • Gleenn said:

    The story is a typical event from the society when people heavily driven by emotions commit crimes even to the very ones they love. But then I wonder if it’s really true love?

    A little bit more work and play with words will make this a great piece. :)

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    # 7 October 2009 at 3:12 pm
  • The Colors Magazine (author) said:

    Strong writing here. A story of someone’s life, in such a small piece of writing. Beautiful :)

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    # 13 October 2009 at 4:48 pm
  • Honorable Mention in the 55 Fiction Contest | Brian Thomas Clark said:

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