Curtained: 55 Fiction
2 October 2009
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Contest entry #6: Curtained
From the black spherical room of his, Zed saw civilizations discovered, the moon conquered, words carried through air, health cures magically made all in a few years. He could see travel through solids, structures of vapour, artificially made human blood all in a few years. And yet science called his black spherical eyes blind.
Author: Zahid Hussain, blogging at http://flavorz.blogspot.com
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(3 votes, average: 2.67 out of 5)
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love the way you conveyed the blind man’s state of mind and that too in just 55 words:)
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it was a touching piece for sure….
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u expressed it so beautifully ..and its so touching
urs..hemu..
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I thought it was going to be a sci-fi piece. You caught me off-guard though. But then again, that’s the whole purpose of 55wf.
Liked the different take a lot.
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I thot it is going to be a science fiction stuff about some robots and aliens, but the last line made the difference and broke my perception
It is about a blind man…
Awesome work !!
Kally
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It was really good and you know that since you were one of 6 authors that impressed me the most
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