Contest Entry #40
4 October 2009
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Contest Entry #40
“It’s over Aaron!”
These words resonated in his head as he starred aghast at his screen. Aaron was flummoxed to say the least. To add salt to his wounds, Julia wasn’t even responding to any his replies.
Somewhere else, Julia enters her room.
“Timmy! What the hell are you doing on my computer?”
Author: Vincent Jyrwa
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Interesting! This has happened to many of us.
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yes happens many times:)
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It has effortless thought provoking approach. It made me read it for how many times to figure out the relationship of Aaron and Timmy.
Good one.
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Nice one, Vince…I’m guessing timmy is the Julia’s kid brother?
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nice one buddy :)…
urs..hemu..
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Pranks people play. Very common activity. Nicely put!
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Ooh, good one. The last line puts a nice twist to it… full of intriguing/humourous possibilities.
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That was good, that was smart, that was cute in a way too. I wonder what happened after.
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Vince Reply:
November 2nd, 2009 at 4:11 pm
Too bad there wasn’t another round for the shortlisted entries =P
But thanks. This story was quite spontaneous.
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