Chrysalis Ending: 55 Fiction
2 October 2009
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Contest Entry #15: Chrysalis Ending
She looked down at the rust-coloured blood.
Confusion and fear coursing over her, before cold understanding settled over numb limbs.
Her life, as she knew it, was ending.
She slumped to the floor, onto hard unforgiving tile.
But unwavering faith in the omnipotence of her mother kept back the tears.
It was her first period.
About the author: Diana Daoust, an English and Science teacher with a love of words, a supportive husband and a cat with ADHD. Diana has won the Sheldon Oberman award for poetry and currently runs the Pandora Poetry contest. She hopes to become famous and rich and winning this contest would be a good start.
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Well captured emotions out here….
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Very well described !! very very well described. From the rust coloured blood to tear holding !!!
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nicely described in 55 words :)…and as anwesa said emotions beautifully captured :)..
urs..hemu..
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You realy have a way with words.. The confusions of a teenager is well described.
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Ah the confusion of the first period! Awesome! Again a fav of mine
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That is a very sensitive topic for a young girl. Well described
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