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Cherapunji: 55 Fiction

4 October 2009 7 Comments

Contest Entry #34: Cherapunji

“Once you land here, u can feel that everything smells of rain. I come here only to get drenched in this pure rain. A new me is born whenever…”
“Shhhh…Let the clouds of pain that are hovering in your eyes take the shape of rain today.
Let you say, a true me is born today.”

Author: Preetilata, blogging at My White Window

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  • Hemanth Potluri said:

    those were wonderful 55 words pretty :)…i just feel i could feel the new me when i to get drenched in the awesome rain..:)…i am just loving ur post pretty :)..

    urs..hemu..

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    # 4 October 2009 at 8:37 pm
  • Prats said:

    Nothing like getting drenched in rains ! and at times even tears give you a new feeling …

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    # 5 October 2009 at 9:18 am
  • Gleenn said:

    These words made me picture mysefl as a child. How I loved rain. But as I grew old, I would prefer more to snuggle under the sheets rather than get drenched under rain.

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    # 6 October 2009 at 5:51 am
  • Amity Me said:

    Pree,

    let me share your love for the rain…but I really like your entry, sounds emo…

    it’s in my place but I guess you’re pretty out of net connection dear…

    miss you Pree

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    # 7 October 2009 at 9:52 am
  • Aniket said:

    This had a visceral feel to it and seems to have come from place deep within. Loved the way it makes one feel…

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    # 7 October 2009 at 6:06 pm
  • The Colors Magazine (author) said:

    you know that I loved the story, right, dear?

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    # 13 October 2009 at 4:57 pm
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    # 16 October 2009 at 4:46 am

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