Acceptance: 55 Fiction
2 October 2009
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Contest entry #1: Acceptance
I’m sitting in the midst of many people, yet I’m alone – dreadfully alone. He means the world to me. He doesn’t have much longer now.
He whispers softly “Be strong, I know you can do it. I’ll always love you”.
I’ve learned from him, and because of him, I can speak these words.. I’m gay.
The author, M. Mackenzie, about herself: I am an unemployed Sales & Marketing professional who has been writing to help fill my unexpected (and currently unlimited) free time. Making the most of my Unemployed “Leisure Time”! Blogging at http://activeleisure.wordpress.com
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(3 votes, average: 1.33 out of 5)
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love the way you started and the end too is good:)
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nicely done :)…the end was also good :)..
urs..hemu..
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It was nicely paced.
I’m glad you didn’t use his sexual preference as a shock element but subtly used it end his inner conflict.
Good job.
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Yes.. The best one line of this 55 fiction is the last line - ‘I’m gay’ Which actually changes the story which otherwise seemed.
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Some people really teach you how to live !
nice …
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The suspense is awesome!!
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It was quite unexpected, but can as well say - real.
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